Thursdays English Class

In thursdays english class we were put in groups to read each others essays and leave comments on what each student can add or what they could improve on such as adding details. When getting into groups it helps me better understand how to improve on my essay and know if my information all makes sense or if I'm missing information so it really helps. But for this weeks group I enjoyed it the most because we as a group decided to go around and talk about how eveyone could improve on or what they could add on each others essays. We thought about good ideas on how we could get more information about our topics such as, who to specifically interview and what areas in New York City each of us could go to get a better idea about our specific topics. I personally got to learn more about each students topics as well as gave ideas on what they could do when interviewing people on their sub culture. I really enjoyed the group I was put in because talking about each others topics rather than just writing down ideas on paper was a better way in understand how to improve on our essays as well as it allowed to express out thoughts in a better way. Overall it was a less akward experience with my classmates because we were open to giving ideas and helping each other out to improve in our essays instead of being quiet and not wanting to talk at all. It was both fun and helpful.