group critics

having group critics every time we start another essay is really helpful for me because I get so many peoples opinion about my draft, and different people telling me what they like about my essay so I can extend on it and what they think I should expand on is super helpful. knowing that I can better my essay before I hand it in helps my grades. today 3 people looked over my essay and told me I should go more into details about my me wanting to pursue my fashion career because I didn't give that much info, I'm glad they were so blunt about it because now I can fix my essay before I hand it in.