This Thursday, we had group critiques about our own drafts in the class.  You know, it was my first time to ask to write an essay with so many pages which challenged me because  I had never written it in that case. I just could finish an essay on one page that was my limit. In the class, even though I  had an only one-page draft to share, I  gained a lot from my classmates and my professor which were useful to me. They suggested that my essay should connect with more about my experiences and gave more specific details. With the help of their suggestions, I think I will write the essay much better than ever before.